ENG359 Larissa Ione’s Immortal Rider Journal
I need a 3-4 paragraph journal written that covers the following:
In this journal assignment, select a new work from the reading list you created in the Module One journal (Larissa Ione’s Immortal Rider).
Read through the work, taking careful notes as if you were workshopping the piece for a peer. Specifically, look for areas that could be expanded on, deleted, or rewritten, and write a list of lingering questions you have after finishing the work. When providing feedback, you should always try to keep the original vision of the story in mind. Specifically, the following critical elements must be addressed:
- Identify the one area of the text that clearly illustrates the writer’s vision or goals (e.g., a specific theme that seems to be carried throughout the story, an ongoing conflict that is building towards some sort of resolution, a character that has an attribute that is mentioned several times in the text).
- Describe how would you further revise this piece while keeping the writer’s original vision or goals intact.
- Describe ways could you revise the piece so that it veers in a different direction from the writer’s original vision. What else would need to change in the story to make it consistent and effective? Would this complete revision make sense, or does it seem counterproductive? Why or why not?
The rubric must be read before starting the assignment. Please cite in MLA format.