I wrote a research proposal about ‘the impact of feminist movement on male’s attitude‘, but some sentences are copied from other articles, and some sentences are informal.
Therefore, I need some help of
1. Paraphrase some paragraphs.
2. Smoothen the sentence into more academic style.
3. Reduce the number of words to around 700 words. (Now is 945 words)
I have marked ‘which help do I need’ in every paragraph.
Some paragraphs need to be paraphrased, some only need to be smoothen.
The essay is in the attachment.
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