fixing my essay ASAP.

hello,

I already made an essay with another tutor her, but she didn’t response me now and the time is over !!

there’s no time to waste , I just need someone to follow my tutor request:

* For the personal pronoun : she said delete everything about it. It is better to include two citations in each body paragraph think

*You have to say what is important you must list it and citations should be specific

*She said focus on the ((citations)), read the picture reference that I sent before, and she said we have to make sure that we do all the essay.

She focused on the 3 pages from the hand book, told me read it very well and make sure that you do all the essay don’t leave anything.

I’ll attach all paper and files latter.